But one day Rose went to the concentration cap to give food to the poor. Once she turned around she saw the soldjer coming towards her she promised she would give food to them tommrow. 24 hours later Rose didn't come that night is Rose dead or alive?????????? TO BE CONTINUE..........
The secret is told, she is still alive..."Whe--re am I?" Questioned Rose while scratching her head. As she got to her feet she slowly turned around. Rose gasped,
Is Rose alive or dead...... The next day, the solider round a red ribbon in the dust. He picked it up and smelt the ribbon, the solider had noticed that somebody has been sneaking around the concentration camp. As they investigated how has been hanging around the camp, a dark shadow appeared from the open... Suddenly, it was Rose standing in the open, her mother was really scared if she died or not. She is very lucky that she hasn't been caught from a solider. The soliders followed the shadow that's been walking around and they held there gun and... BANG!!! They went straight in her back. She screamed in pain. AHHHH!!! To be continued......
One day later they found out Rose was dead... The poor people were devastated because Rose always gave them food but then after a while, they had a question in their head and then they found out why. Many people in the Concentration Camp were starving they had to drink hot, brown and sandy water most of the people could have died, luckily the other are still alive because of God.. After that, the people that were in the Concentration Camp finally escaped and found new families to stay with, every single Jew went to Rose's grave and prayed over her and one by one each of them put flowers on top of the grave and touched there hurt. Although, they were out of that disgraceful place they were still sad that Rose had gone. A month later a women gave birth, year by year her daughter grew up just to be like Rose they looked like twins... But the girls name was Gabrielle and by time she was 11 the war had stopped.
After nine months rose disappeared, her mum looked everywhere but there was no sign off her until now. On that terrible day rose was captured and torched by the Nazi. It was the day that she was supposed to be executed but there was none in the holding sell. Where could she be? After be kept prisoner she discover how there a hole on the ground quickly she went through then ran. She was free>
Rose diceded to take a short cut at home! while she was walking something catch her eye all the people string at her waiting for her to give them food.Thats when Rose took a moment to think what should I do. she had to do something what should we do
I really thought that it was a good piece of work and I like how he explained what roes had seen and smelt and explained what the weather was like to.
ReplyDeletegodswill this story is lovely
ReplyDeleteElspeth what do you think will happen next?
ReplyDeleteBut one day Rose went to the concentration cap to give food to the poor. Once she turned around she saw the soldjer coming towards her she promised she would give food to them tommrow. 24 hours later Rose didn't come that night is Rose dead or alive??????????
ReplyDeleteTO BE CONTINUE..........
The secret is told, she is still alive..."Whe--re am I?" Questioned Rose while scratching her head. As she got to her feet she slowly turned around. Rose gasped,
ReplyDeleteI really liked the story goodwill I think that rose might be alive but lost in action. what do you think?
ReplyDeleteIs Rose alive or dead...... The next day, the solider round a red ribbon in the dust. He picked it up and smelt the ribbon, the solider had noticed that somebody has been sneaking around the concentration camp. As they investigated how has been hanging around the camp, a dark shadow appeared from the open... Suddenly, it was Rose standing in the open, her mother was really scared if she died or not. She is very lucky that she hasn't been caught from a solider. The soliders followed the shadow that's been walking around and they held there gun and... BANG!!! They went straight in her back. She screamed in pain. AHHHH!!! To be continued......
ReplyDeleteI like the way you described the appearance of the weather.
ReplyDeleteOne day later they found out Rose was dead... The poor people were devastated because Rose always gave them food but then after a while, they had a question in their head and then they found out why. Many people in the Concentration Camp were starving they had to drink hot, brown and sandy water most of the people could have died, luckily the other are still alive because of God.. After that, the people that were in the Concentration Camp finally escaped and found new families to stay with, every single Jew went to Rose's grave and prayed over her and one by one each of them put flowers on top of the grave and touched there hurt. Although, they were out of that disgraceful place they were still sad that Rose had gone. A month later a women gave birth, year by year her daughter grew up just to be like Rose they looked like twins... But the girls name was Gabrielle and by time she was 11 the war had stopped.
ReplyDeleteThe END!
After nine months rose disappeared, her mum looked everywhere but there was no sign off her until now. On that terrible day rose was captured and torched by the Nazi. It was the day that she was supposed to be executed but there was none in the holding sell. Where could she be? After be kept prisoner she discover how there a hole on the ground quickly she went through then ran. She was free>
ReplyDeleteRose diceded to take a short cut at home! while she was walking something catch her eye
ReplyDeleteall the people string at her waiting for her to give them food.Thats when Rose took a moment to think what should I do. she had to do something what should we do