Rose Blanch took a short-cut through the forest, where bare branches scratched her face. The road below her and the lorry were a long way ahead. She was so tired, she felt like giving up. Then, she stumbled into a clearing and could hardly believe what she saw ...
What did Rose see? Continue the story.
Frightened, she walked towards the devastation. After a few minutes later frozen on the spot, she could smell the stench of the rotting pale body's from 1 mile away. "Help please help us! "The imprisoned girl angrily shouted.She was so frightened she just couldn't bare to witness those people so she went home.
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She caught a glimpse of pale looking children groaning and moaning like Zombies inside the trailer. Hmmm! she thought this can't be the Jewish camp. All of a sudden something gripped her. Crack! Creek! the woods and branches crunched as she tried to hurry away. Behind her she saw an innocent boy with sunken eyes. He grabbed her like she was his mum.
ReplyDeleteIt was dead silence. "please give me food" whispered the voice.
" Help! Help!" the voice broke. The little boy tried to get out the trailer for Rose to help. But he couldn't
" Stop! Stop! Or ill shoot." shouted a soldier. Rose jumped into the thick and tatty bush. The light gleamed at her.
After several minutes later, frozen on the spot Rose walked slowly towards the edge and she saw all of these ghost looking people shouting in desperation for their dear lives.
ReplyDelete"Please little girl would you break bread with us, please, it only has to be a little piece" But rose stepped back with fear and just that moment.......
Darkness was real, nightmares begun. Rose was speechless. Dozens of silent children locked up behind barbwires. They looked like Mummies, but most of all they had no souls. ''Help me, feed me!'' said a pale boy scratching the walls. She gasped in horror '' Um... I... I don't have any food'' she said. (Bang!) a sound of a sniper rifle. ''Hey you, stop or I will shoot!'' exclaimed a German solider. She ran as quick as flash. Each night Rose try to forget the terror. But one day Rose decided to take drastic measure to her hands. She used all her lifesavings in order to buy lots of foods. She got to the concentration camp then threw all her food over the barbwires. As soon as they dropped all the children scattered to the floor as rats. ''Thank you, oh what glory you have'' they muttered. Then one morning Rose went to the concentration to give food to the poor children but she vanished like a ghost. 9 months later, the devastated children starve to death. Is Rose dead or alive...? To be continued ...
ReplyDeleteWow Godswill, the language you've used is such high quality. Please would you come to year 3 and work with some of my children to improve their vocabulary?
DeleteZombie-like people moaning of hunger, comfort and temperature. Shivering in terror while she's passing through the place. Poorly people begging for food. Soldiers beating women for nothing. Children couldn't get up from the floor. "But the president said that only the Jewish and the dark featured adults were going to the concentration camp. Was he lying? He announced not the children," thought Rose. So later that night she went to the kitchen to get a whole load of food. She said she was going to her friend's house just to get her school books. She said it would take 10 minutes. Next morning, Rose was never to be seen again..
ReplyDeleteRose rubbed her eyes again and again to see if it was real. She could see there ribcages even though they were wearing tops. They came walking towards her like zombies, a little kid came and asked for food. At first she asked them were they Jewish and they said yes. She gave him juice and a sandwich and that's all she had. When the boy that asked for food came near her he smelt like he was put in a gas chamber.
ReplyDeleteNervously, she took 3 little steps and was horrified by the white pale faces, shining in the gloom. Caged like animals with the electric fences blocking there freedom and there humanity then!" A boy wailed up please give me some food". And then, a Nazi solider came up with a swastika on his right sleeve and dragged out a Jewish priest like a ragdoll but she wasn't willing to follow and made a last stand saying" we Jews don't deserve to be locked up like animals if t to take them next you'll have to come through me" suddenly the solider gruesomely shot her down in the middle of the day as if he felt no pain.
ReplyDeleteAs Rose blanche walked along the narrow path as the branches from the tree flict her across her face leaving her with red line on her face at the corner of her eyes she saw a group of people gathered along she thought ''why are they there?'' she couldn't get pass the solders because they were guarding them they looked like they were petrified of something or someone
ReplyDeleteI was shocked to the point where she had to stop for a minute and take a deep breath. I saw a mysterious place covered with barb wire and electric volts. The next thing you know she heard people shouting help "What is this place" wondered Rose.
ReplyDeleteUntil ghostly like faces appeared. The ghostly like faces had no hair at all.
Rose decided to take a short cut into the forest.There was lots of twigs that scratched her leg then started to bleed. She was tired of walking, she felt like giving up Until..........
ReplyDeleteshe saw women men and children wearing parjarams and wearing a star on the side something was not right and she wanted to no now.
TO BE CONTINUED..........
pale faces with veins and whips of lines across faces. They had the star of David on the their chest to show they were Jews. The y looked like zombies when they saw me the stood up and started saying "hungry" Rose Blanche Didn't have food on her. She felt sorry for them. she left in a hurry thinking shall I tell mother or shall I be a hero and save them. Rose Blanche is a Brave little girl so she did what she would have always done so when the sun set she left the house carrying a packet of apples and some drinks.............
ReplyDeleteWith her own bear eyes, Rose saw poorly, pale people moving like the living dead. they looked skinny than normal. She moved closer. A woman ran to the front and shouted
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she was bewildered..... Rose saw a boy groing to me
" free us free us please"
Rose tried to help him. As I moved closer the boy jumped, knowing he wanted food I gave him my last piece of bread.
"HULT"
a guard shouted. I ran as fast as I could but he was catching up to me...
People starving to death. Rose was hoping to see a nice place and everybody happy. But then she saw something completely different what she was thinking of. She could hear gunshots, screaming, shouting and crying. Rose could not believe her eyes. She just froze there on the spot. Rose could smell sweaty bodies she could see, dead bodies. As Rose was walking home she saw a little boy being shouted at by a soldier while he is crying.
ReplyDeleteShe saw children behind the fence they all had pale faces. Rose saw a little boy with a blanket wrap around him he was the only one that looked really hungry. The little boy told Rose
ReplyDelete"Do you have any food to share with me I will do anything for some food."
"I will try my best to find food for you without getting caught.
Rose saw pale people.Walking like zombies she was frightened.A little boy asked
ReplyDelete"Do you have any food to share?"
"sorry no but whats your name ?" she replied
He said "Albert"
Rose thought if she makes a collection of food she would give the Jews and then give it to them so they get back healthy .............................................TBC (To be continue)
She saw pale faces, starving men and crying babies. She was wondering if it was a mixture of exhaustion and dehydration which made her hallucinate. She took a deep long breath and was SPEECHLESS. This was not a figment of her imagination! All of their pale faces turned to Rose and in unison they cried, "please.. please ... please give us food... food ...food and if we live we will repay you", while two were standing by watching if there were guards. Their hands were shaking furiously fast. They were stammering when they spoke. This one women said "please give me food to ...to feed... feed... feed my daughter." At the back of the camp in the gloom she saw a rotting body. It was repulsive! Their veins were popping out and she could see their bones. She noticed they had a weird star on their chest. They looked like zombies, all of them were moaning like zombies. One man shouted "FOOD," but she never had any on her. She felt soooo sorry for them! She left in a hurry and wandered if she should tell her mother. While she was running back she said to herself "I'm going to collect food for them and give it to them every day."
ReplyDeleteShe could hardly believe what see saw. Men grabbing children by the neck, holding guns by their throat. The soilders started to walking towards her. Rose started backing up and ran as fast as a cheeta! The soilders thought she was too fast to catch her, so they called the rest of the soilders. She slipped and banged her face on the ground! Men saw her running for her life, she slide to the corner and the look in her eye you can tell something worse is going to happen. Would she risk her life to help the Jewish children or save her own life? To be continued...
ReplyDeleteI saw a barb wired gate. I tiptoed up to it I could see pale zombies. I was nearly going to shout but I remembered, that if I shouted I would be caught by the soldiers. So I got more closer, there were crying babies, men begging for food. I quickly sprinted though the forest but I didn't know that I forgot my hair band. 5 minuets later was near by to my house. I felt my hair and my band was gone. I quickly sprinted back though the forest, over the gates passed the pond and in no time I was back at the camp where I saw ...
ReplyDeletethis is for year five what did you think will happen next when she saw the concentration camp?
ReplyDeleteI think Rose saw pale hungry faces begging with a whisper for food . even though they could see Rose was on her own without food trying to hide from the soldiers .
ReplyDeletehow would you've been feeling if that was you in the concentration camp
ReplyDeleteAfter nine months Rose's mum continued her quest. As she was looking for her beloved daughter her mum saw the lifeless forest as she saw....
ReplyDeleteHer mum ran as fast as she could running after the track. Then she remembered that her daughter tought her a short cut through the forest. As she got closer closer to the track she herd a voice saying "lets kill all those smelly JEWS!"
as the man laughed so loud the windows cracked. HELP HELP HELP !!!!
"My daughter its Rose," her mother said in disbelief. Pow!!!!!!!!!!!!! she got shot
Do you think rose is going to escape??????
when rose stalked the truck she said ''this looks suspicious'', then suddenly she saw a concentration camp she gasped,she was shocked of what she saw...
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